Tyler- Things Read

This second nine weeks, we have not really read anything in class, but we did watch a movie over the paramedic method. I honestly liked the movie because it gave me a way to look at something in a way I have never before. It made me think as an outside reader or someone else who is reading your paper. It made me realize that mostly everyone tends to add unnecessary padding to sentences. One lesson I learned from the video was to never use "be" verb forms if possible. It does not show complete action of a sentence uses a "be" verb. Another lesson I learned is to try and avoid using multiple prepositional phrases in a row. When a writer does this, it sounds like the writer is making a list and it just seems to last forever. Also, do not confuse your reader. Make paragraphs more clear and concise because it makes for a better read.