Mason's Lesson's Learned

Recently we have been learning how to use the paramedic method. It is a revising process that you eliminate the unnecessary material. Sentences can be shorter and say the exact same thing and all the same information. The fisrt step is to get rid of the prepostitions. The second step is to throw out the be verbs. The third step is to get rid of slow wind up and get straight to the point. This type of revision makes the paper shorter, but it makes the paper more full of imformation in a less amount of words.