Erin's Lessons Learned

We have recently learned a new and very helpful way to revise our papers. It is called the Paramedic Method. There are basically three steps to this method. The first step is to circle all of your prepositions. Once you have finished that, you have to put a box around your "be" verbs. Then, eliminate your slow wind-ups. If you do these steps, your paper will be much clearer for the reader to comprehend. My paper sounded ten times better after following these steps.