On Composition

Paper number two was a paper that we had to write and compose in class. It was a challenging but exciting way to write. We did not have the opportunity to meet in our peer review groups and we all believe that this effected us greatly. Most of the time whenever we gather into our peer review groups, we use our time wisely and efficiently which allows for an outside view and some much needed corrections. Not trying to point anybody out but Mason is the one who usually needs peer review the most. Sometimes, he comes into class having a complete essay but it seems like it is written without effort. He has all his ideas down on paper but his sentences do not complete a thought and he has a lot of run on sentences. Erin and Peyton usually have well written essays that are comprised with at least one unruly paragraph. Tyler on the other hand usually has some great ideas but he does not have them gathered correctly in the paper. As a group, we though paper two was difficult but overall came out a success even though we wrote the paper independently.