On Composition

We all thought that the peer review group was a great influence on how we wrote our papers. It gave an outside look on what we needed to accomplish to make each of our papers individually better. For instance, Mason's paper needed some work in the area of sentence structure. He had a lot of run-on sentences and some of his paragraphs did not complete a full thought. Erin's, Peyton's, and Tyler's paper were very well written but like most papers, they needed some work. As a group, we decided that Peyton's and Erin's paper had some issues with some paragraphs but we resolved them in class when we had time to read each other's papers. Along with all the other papers, Tyler's had some trouble with paragraphs and had a couple problems with transitions and sentences inside other paragraphs. On the whole, our peer review group was a great success in our papers by making them much more readable.